Audio problems ruined it.
The audio was horribly bad. The art work was okay, bad the audio was just.....there are no words I can give to describe how my ears felt like bleeding with the audio on here. Sounds couldn't clearly be determined. I'm not trying to be mean if I'm coming off that way, but I think you need to go back, and try again. Redo this and fix the audio problems. And from what it seems like, you need subtitles, if you're using a different language than what the general newgrounds population speaks. Please do it again, and very corrections, so I can give it a good score.